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[phoenixfire616]

OH and you know what? I just realized something. I can make things SO MUCH EASIER on myself if I just cut out the part with Heng that I originally had planned at the end of Ren's chapter. I mean sure, it'd be pretty cool and interesting to have it, but what I liked about her chapter in the original draft was that I left the chapter open-ended. Like, it kind of ends on a cliffhanger, and you know that something fishy is going on. I should just do that here! And then like during Cho's next chapter, SHE GETS KNOCKED OUT. So that'll add to the suspense!

Shit I think I've got this now. Early morning drives after class sure do help.